Midnight Sparkle's Training Grounds (writing)

Midnight was about to jump into the tar pits. Just then she saw something in the
tar pit. “What is that!” Midnight said. she was confused she saw that the thing
was sinking in it the tar pits. Midnight tries to git it out. but she didn’t reach it in
time. So she jumped in to the tar pits. It was so dark she could not see. She tries to get to the surface. But she just kept on going down in to the tar pits. Then she hit something “ow that hint, hold on that might be what I was trying to pull out?” She was half way up “why was this thing in the tar pits?” Midnight thought. She was out of the tar pits when she saw that she rescued a rock “I went through all of that trouble for a rock? I need a nap” midnight said.